proposal arguments
1
strength:-- The topic was overall good to talk about since it was local
-- It seemed like it would have maybe a kind of easy fix
weakness: --they didn't really talk about a solution
--they just said that the advisory for students had a solution, but it would mot likely worsen the problem, which is not a solution at all.
2
strength:-- The thesis clearly states the problem in the authors perspective
--also shows how the problem can be fixed with the meal plans outside of the cafeteria.
weakness: I think that if the author used some statistics and used some direct quotes from people or websites about the part where women eat more than men and how this solution would be the best would be good for the topic.
3
strength: --The author had really good facts to back up why we should adopt nuclear power
-- talking about the climate changes in the atmosphere is really informative since it effects everyone
weakness: I think that this proposal may be too big since it is a worldwide problem that they are talking about. This problem isn't really local.
Ranking
meal plan
textbooks
nuclear power
strength:-- The topic was overall good to talk about since it was local
-- It seemed like it would have maybe a kind of easy fix
weakness: --they didn't really talk about a solution
--they just said that the advisory for students had a solution, but it would mot likely worsen the problem, which is not a solution at all.
2
strength:-- The thesis clearly states the problem in the authors perspective
--also shows how the problem can be fixed with the meal plans outside of the cafeteria.
weakness: I think that if the author used some statistics and used some direct quotes from people or websites about the part where women eat more than men and how this solution would be the best would be good for the topic.
3
strength: --The author had really good facts to back up why we should adopt nuclear power
-- talking about the climate changes in the atmosphere is really informative since it effects everyone
weakness: I think that this proposal may be too big since it is a worldwide problem that they are talking about. This problem isn't really local.
Ranking
meal plan
textbooks
nuclear power
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